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Hamartithia by Joyfool Hamartithia by Joyfool
Hamartithia - being likely to make a mistake

Because I made the mistake of attempting to draw swans and wet cloth. @ 7 @ I suddenly felt the need to incorporate animals into my artworks, so here goes some silly swans. Also, I recently realized that even though Princess Kairy is a character I made almost 5 years ago, I had never made a decent artwork of just her. I always draw her with Jack tagging along, and even here there's a hint of him LOL. Gotta try that again.

I think is is going to be Kairy's new hairstyle. I swear, she changes every time I draw her. Orz
Lets hope this is the permanent look...

Kairy from 'Jesterday' © =Joyfool

I'll reply to notes and comments tomorrow, sorry and thank you! :'D
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Critique by MissStory Jan 14, 2013, 5:16:39 PM
The first thing I noticed about this picture was the bright colors. The yellow, the orange give this picture a honey sweet appearance.
You are really good at portraying your characters. I like how you drew her in dark green, making her pop from the rest of the picture. The vines and swing also have a very special touch that make it unique and beautiful. The swans-flawless. I like the texture in the feathers.
The only thing really bugging me about this piece is how the colors don't seem to fit together, if that makes any sense. Like the green and the honey colors don't mix very well. Plus it looks rather unusual for swans to be swimming in the honey, or whatever you intended the liquid to be. I personally think it would look alot better if it was a forest scene with lush green trees and the 'honey' being some small pond. I believe it would really add to the picture. The proportions look very well done, I love how you did her knees especially.
I'm sure you had a purpose for doing what you did in this picture, but I hope this helps.
Your art is amazing! Keep up the good work :)
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I am so amazed, this piece is just so LOVELY!

The colours are so beautiful and very well balanced. I really like all the greens, this piece was really eye catching and I just had to check it out.

Your attention for detail is great! There were so many details placed on the swans that it looks very realistic, although I find it a little bit odd to if there is a realistic and cartoon (Japanese) together in one art piece. It is like placing a pencil and a spoon together.

I really like those circles in the background though, it makes the girl look all bright even though her colours are dark. Nice thought of balance there.

I have rated only 3 stars for originaity because I have seen such theme before. It wasn't weird but normal, ahahaha
The more weird a picture the more original it is and interesting.

Well done to your technical skills though, all proportions are excellent and you are a very good artist.
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Explosion245 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Do you use a tablet? Owo
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Joyfool Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014
Yes :)
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Shadet06Vocaloid Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Your art style.....


Is amazing.....
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:iconjoyfool:
Joyfool Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013
Thank you!! :D
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Shadet06Vocaloid Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
My compiter art skills suck XD
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:iconjoyfool:
Joyfool Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013
You gotta' practice lots! D:
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Shadet06Vocaloid Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
o3o ok!
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Nazifazahara Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh my freaking gawd this is gorgeous *^* <3
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:iconjoyfool:
Joyfool Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013
Thank you very much! ; 7 ; 
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SilentBeautiful Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
How did you do that????
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Joyfool Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013
Do what? ' 7 '
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Maetessa Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Professional Artisan Crafter
I see you have LOTS of comments, so I'll just point out my favorite part -- The texture/design on the dress. It just adds a nice little "something" to what would otherwise be just a solid color :)
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Joyfool Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013
Haha, thank you very much! I'm glad you like it, the dress was a load of fun! :)
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feetishfemale Featured By Owner May 30, 2013
que preciosa galeria me enamore
felicitaciones por tu excelente trabajo
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Joyfool Featured By Owner May 30, 2013
Muchisimas gracias! Me alegra que le gusta tanto! :D
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feetishfemale Featured By Owner May 31, 2013
;)
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Jacob-Cross Featured By Owner May 6, 2013
Lovely ^u^
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Aistraa Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013
very amazing :aww: <3~ the swans and girl are gorgeous!
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pichu799 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:D the trumpeter swans look so elegant~ this is amazing~
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Rinselli Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013
I like seeing Kairy have different hairstyles. <3333 She's so beautiful. <33

You're absolutely amazing at animals. Even the effects with the reflection in the ripples look amazing to me. ;u; You're such an inspiration. <3333
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quackityquack Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013
Amazing!!!!! so beautiful cant think of actual words to properly convey my actual thoughts
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ButterflyPigment Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Breathtaking...those swans...that dress! It has such a lovely, soft feeling~
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Joyfool Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013
Thank you very much! :D
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GreenTeaPhoenix Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013
I can understand that the background is yellow to balance out the primary colors of the flowers and the jack-in-the-box; however, because there's yellow in the color green, and the main focus of the picture seems to be the girl, who is wearing green, it's...too much yellow.

I mean the picture is still nice, though~!
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Joyfool Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013
I agree, it could had been softened a little more, or even changed to some other dull color. Not to forget, the hot pink in the corner, it does draw out the attention from the girl.

Thank you very much for your comment! :hug:
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MintChocoFusion Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013
such a lovely green!! :iconhurrplz:
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Joyfool Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013
Thank you~! :iconohstopityouplz:
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Naaracool Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013
*o* so pretty~ seriously i love all of that picture >w<!
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Joyfool Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013
Thank you! C:
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Naaracool Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013
your welcome~
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BumpyTheShroom Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Professional General Artist
I love this! So pretty!
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Joyfool Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013
Than you! * v *
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BumpyTheShroom Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013  Professional General Artist
You are welcome! ^w^
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macurris Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013
cada vez me gusta más como coloreas...
me quedo mucho rato viendo todos los detalles
de tus dibujos, lindisimos como siempre
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Joyfool Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013
EEEEEEEEEEEE Muchas graciaaaaaass!! * v * Me alegra que los difruta~!
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SonicMasterHero Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013
Kairy...is that Jack in your hands?
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:iconjoyfool:
Joyfool Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013
Maybe~
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SonicMasterHero Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013
(sits by Kairy) Kairy? Why does the king hate Jack so much?
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Tajii-chan Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is so simple, yet so elegant :heart:

Mistake? But it's so pretty! The swans especially turned out great, and the ripples in the water are just magical *w* Kairy has a beautiful design; I especially love the attention to details on the folds of her dress! The color scheme-- the yellow with the green works really nicely too *w*
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Joyfool Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013
Haha, aw thank you, sweetie! :hug:
Those swans were quite hard, I needed so many references, but I'm glad the work was payed off!
Thank you very much, you're too nice! Q 7 Q
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N-Lilix Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love how you colour, it's so gorgeous ;w;
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Joyfool Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
Thank you very much! :hug:
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N-Lilix Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome :iconaawplz:
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yooci Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful!
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Joyfool Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
Thank you! ^^
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black-lightning6 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
so beautiful! I wish I could draw liquid like you do ;^;
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Joyfool Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
Thank you! Just look at photos of rivers and sea and try imitating them. C:
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black-lightning6 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013
good idea ^^
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Metalraptor Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Incredible artwork. :D
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Joyfool Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
Thank you! :)
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