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Hamartithia by Joyfool Hamartithia by Joyfool
Hamartithia - being likely to make a mistake

Because I made the mistake of attempting to draw swans and wet cloth. @ 7 @ I suddenly felt the need to incorporate animals into my artworks, so here goes some silly swans. Also, I recently realized that even though Princess Kairy is a character I made almost 5 years ago, I had never made a decent artwork of just her. I always draw her with Jack tagging along, and even here there's a hint of him LOL. Gotta try that again.

I think is is going to be Kairy's new hairstyle. I swear, she changes every time I draw her. Orz
Lets hope this is the permanent look...

Kairy from 'Jesterday' =Joyfool

I'll reply to notes and comments tomorrow, sorry and thank you! :'D
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Critique by MissStory Jan 14, 2013, 5:16:39 PM
The first thing I noticed about this picture was the bright colors. The yellow, the orange give this picture a honey sweet appearance.
You are really good at portraying your characters. I like how you drew her in dark green, making her pop from the rest of the picture. The vines and swing also have a very special touch that make it unique and beautiful. The swans-flawless. I like the texture in the feathers.
The only thing really bugging me about this piece is how the colors don't seem to fit together, if that makes any sense. Like the green and the honey colors don't mix very well. Plus it looks rather unusual for swans to be swimming in the honey, or whatever you intended the liquid to be. I personally think it would look alot better if it was a forest scene with lush green trees and the 'honey' being some small pond. I believe it would really add to the picture. The proportions look very well done, I love how you did her knees especially.
I'm sure you had a purpose for doing what you did in this picture, but I hope this helps.
Your art is amazing! Keep up the good work :)
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I am so amazed, this piece is just so LOVELY!

The colours are so beautiful and very well balanced. I really like all the greens, this piece was really eye catching and I just had to check it out.

Your attention for detail is great! There were so many details placed on the swans that it looks very realistic, although I find it a little bit odd to if there is a realistic and cartoon (Japanese) together in one art piece. It is like placing a pencil and a spoon together.

I really like those circles in the background though, it makes the girl look all bright even though her colours are dark. Nice thought of balance there.

I have rated only 3 stars for originaity because I have seen such theme before. It wasn't weird but normal, ahahaha
The more weird a picture the more original it is and interesting.

Well done to your technical skills though, all proportions are excellent and you are a very good artist.
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Explosion245 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Do you use a tablet? Owo
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Joyfool Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014
Yes :)
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Shadet06Vocaloid Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Your art style.....


Is amazing.....
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Joyfool Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013
Thank you!! :D
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Shadet06Vocaloid Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
My compiter art skills suck XD
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Joyfool Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013
You gotta' practice lots! D:
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Shadet06Vocaloid Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
o3o ok!
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Nazifazahara Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh my freaking gawd this is gorgeous *^* <3
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Joyfool Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013
Thank you very much! ; 7 ; 
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SilentBeautiful Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
How did you do that????
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