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"Jack, I said no ball in the hall."
Reminded Jinny with her call
-"But what is it about my ball
that I can’t play with it in the hall?"
Jinny glared at the little clown
"It will turn the hall upside down."
-“Turn upside down? That's a neat trick!
How do you do that? With a kick?"
-"You kick that ball and I'll pull your ear
You can play outside, but never here."
Jinny walked away and left Jack aware
about the ball in the hall, it was no dare.
Jack quickly ran the hall to play outside
but running made his shoelaces untie
He tripped and the ball flew off his hands
It knocked four vases and two table stands
And right after the loud "crash" and "crack"
Jinny came back furious shouting at Jack
'What did I say? Didn't you listen at all?!'
- 'Yes, I did, you said no ball in the hall!'
- 'Then why did you disobeyed me if you knew?'
- ' I didn't! It was the ball, it didn't listen to you.'
The angry Jinny walked over to Jack
whose big, silly head got a smack.
Well, I can't write to save my life, but here I go. I'm not sure if you'd be able
to tell but I'm a HUGE fan of Dr. Seuss' stories and riddles!
Here I finally introduce a character from Jesterday's cast: Jeannette a.k.a. Jinny.
She's a character based off my real life best friend, and I have to say, Jinny and
Jack have the most amusing relationship. Even though Jack messes up sometimes
by accident, he takes advantage of the case and makes Jinny very irritated. Jinny
was the kind of maid that enjoyed her job until Jack came along. While she is strict
she haves her tender side, just make sure you don't do what Jack does to her. u v u
She haves an elder sister that also works as a maid, Lizzette a.k.a. Lizzy, who I'll
illustrate soon, hopefully.
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If anybody can suggest better lines for this silly little poem/story, feel free to do so,
just keep in mind that writing is not my thing-yo. I can't even categorize this...
to tell but I'm a HUGE fan of Dr. Seuss' stories and riddles!
Here I finally introduce a character from Jesterday's cast: Jeannette a.k.a. Jinny.
She's a character based off my real life best friend, and I have to say, Jinny and
Jack have the most amusing relationship. Even though Jack messes up sometimes
by accident, he takes advantage of the case and makes Jinny very irritated. Jinny
was the kind of maid that enjoyed her job until Jack came along. While she is strict
she haves her tender side, just make sure you don't do what Jack does to her. u v u
She haves an elder sister that also works as a maid, Lizzette a.k.a. Lizzy, who I'll
illustrate soon, hopefully.
Similar Artworks
If anybody can suggest better lines for this silly little poem/story, feel free to do so,
just keep in mind that writing is not my thing-yo. I can't even categorize this...
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This is a cute poem. Poor Jack, it wasn't his fault X3